This is my reading group's trailer of a story kick-start the orignly made by Simon Cooke. I am a rugby player. My favourite part is when the rugby players use their space ship for the ball . I hope you enjoy. Kick Start from Kieren Moriarty on Vimeo.
This is my coat of arms describing me and my family . The top on the left is all the things I ride with weels. The top one on the right is my great grandma's blazer and my great grandad's 4 leaf clover. The bottom one on the left is all the sport I play and want to play. Last of all is where I was born England.
WALT choose words that describe a moment for the reader
YOUR SIGNS OF SUCCESS
begin in the action
present tense (I am, not I was)
short, sharp sentences
uses the senses (smell, taste, look, hear, touch)
There I was ready to smash the Havelock Sharks. I could
just taste the victory salivating in my mouth. As we warm up, I glance over and peek at their warm up drills. The whistle blows and the game starts. I boot the ball high into the air. They catch the ball and run straight towards me. I brace myself and tackle him to the ground. I get straight to my feet and scoop the ball up. I sprint straight towards the tryline, I fend and step and bam I get taken out. As I fall I reach over the line and plant the ball down. It was a Try! The score at half time 4 to 3 to us.
After the break they came whizzing out and scored a flukey try that must of been the oranges. As they boot the ball I speed straight through the middle of them. I place the ball over the line. Try time. At the moment the score was 9 to
us and 8 to them. The final play we kick the ball and Jono catches the ball. He runs straight over James our wing and scores. Unfortunately it was a try. It ended up 9 to 9. It was a draw.
There I was standing right in the middle of the sandy field. He kicks the ball, I catch the ball. I charge up the sandy field like never before. I get tackled. I fall onto the soft sand. Suddenly I stand up and get passed the ball again. Rapidly I sprint then dive straight over the try line. We won 3 to 2. We ended up winning our pool so we went into the championship division and in the division was Peterhead, Flaxmere, Maraenui and Parkvale. We ended up coming third overall so I was pretty pleased.
On the same ordinary day at the the ordinary skate bowl was a new funky colourful skateboarder. We all just stopped and stared as he went up and down the ordinary skate park. Everybody asking so much ordinary questions. He said stop the ordinary ,have a bit of imagination we all said what's that its sort of a dream he replied, so we shut our eyes and I loved my dream I dreamed I could backflip 360 barspin and still land on my ordinary scooter.
All of a sudden I went colorful so did my scooter it was extraordinary it was like a new life dropped in and then I came up and I backflip 360 barspin it was extraordinary. It felt like I could do anything.
I have infact I have ridden heaps of motorbikes. My dad has a Quad bike and some of my friends have motorbikes too. Whizzzoom past flies the red motorbike it feels great riding in the cool summer breeze powering round and round the orchard. I haven't got any protective gear but I have shoes. Sometimes I pick up bins with the trailer from the workers . Boom smash I accidentally drove straight over a massive bump driving 40k per hour luckily all the fruit were ok. Dun dun dun Matthew had smashed the trailer into a poleand took out the pole it was lying there like a lonely little panda.Now I go all round the orchard really carefully but that doesn't slow me down I still go pretty quick .But if we put fruit on the trailer I drive a lot slower.
Thisis my homework. I drew a map of my bedroom. Each metre = 5 cm. Can you work out how big my bed room is ?My room turned out to be 15 by 15cm on my map. As you can see my room is not the tidest room, but sometimes it is clean after the cleaner comes in.