Thursday, April 18, 2013

My Bike

my bike from Room16 Parkvale on Vimeo.

This is my poem about a bike. Enjoy and please leave a comment.


  1. I really enjoy listening to your poem, Samuel.

    First of all, I like how it shares special moments in your life.
    Secondly, I like the different words you chose like 'fantasy', 'charmed' and "fall to the ground with a happy smile'.

    Most of all, I love how you read it with expression and enthusiasm and put meaning and feeling into the words when you recorded it.

  2. I can just imagine you falling "to the ground with a happy smile." What an excellent ending!

  3. Wow That was great,What a brilliant way to share your creative talents and your learning Samuel. Please send me some more of your creations.


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