First of all, I like how it shares special moments in your life. Secondly, I like the different words you chose like 'fantasy', 'charmed' and "fall to the ground with a happy smile'.
Most of all, I love how you read it with expression and enthusiasm and put meaning and feeling into the words when you recorded it.
I really enjoy listening to your poem, Samuel.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I like how it shares special moments in your life.
Secondly, I like the different words you chose like 'fantasy', 'charmed' and "fall to the ground with a happy smile'.
Most of all, I love how you read it with expression and enthusiasm and put meaning and feeling into the words when you recorded it.
I can just imagine you falling "to the ground with a happy smile." What an excellent ending!
ReplyDeleteWow That was great,What a brilliant way to share your creative talents and your learning Samuel. Please send me some more of your creations.
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